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She Used to Know. by *Violentviolets:iconViolentviolets:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Sonnet


Long,long ago there was a girl who had rosy red lips and bronze locks of hair.
Whispers of wishes and dreams hung on her every breath.
Her eyes reflected hopelessness,as she stared backwards,never forward.
She used to know a different time.
A time when she knew color;faces.
The word happiness was sealed to her lips,so she might never forget it.
Fear was etched on her arms.She feared she would never regain the past.
She used to know a different time.
A time when she knew how to mend things;how to not to forget.
Shivers of dread ran up and down her spine day in and day out.
Despair was smeared on her hands messily.
She used to know a different time.
A time when she knew daylight would come;when she knew where she was headed.
She used to.
She used to.
But not anymore.
©2009 *Violentviolets
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Author's Comments

Not sure I like the ending to this one.Probably could've should've would've put a better ending. Meh. Hope you like anyways.:)

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*Violentviolets Jan 9, 2009, 7:00:56 PM
Thanks.:)

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And I said fuck that chicken sandwich!
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~onlyevier Jan 9, 2009, 8:58:43 PM
if she turned around to face the future, would she die? or was she just too afraid?
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*Violentviolets Jan 9, 2009, 9:00:40 PM
More as though she focused on the past and not the future because she was happy in the past.

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And I said fuck that chicken sandwich!
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~lostandalone37 Apr 17, 2009, 1:40:33 PM
love it, mostly cuz i feel like i can relate to everything you write. There's a lot of feeling in your stuff. Def. one of my favorite dAuthors.

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i want to be in love, i want to feel all those happy good amazing feelings you feel when your with the one, i want a kiss without any shame, and to never be alone.
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*Violentviolets Apr 17, 2009, 3:30:27 PM
Yayy!Thank you!:)

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And I said fuck that chicken sandwich!
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